Jeez, I hate to stick out like a sore thumb, but here:
Malfoy feels a bit too jock-ish for me. I think it's the proper up-an-down head. He doesn't quite feel slimy enough. Might just be the front-on angle, though.
What about exaggerating Slughorn's eyes? Making them smaller and pushing them more towards his nose? Right now he feels a bit too thoughtful and a tad too sincere.
Ha ha ha, sorry, you may not have wanted crits. I know they're just sketches. Oh well, just my 2p. It's weird seeing the others older, but hey, they look right! Bueno!
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Date: 2005-07-19 04:40 pm (UTC)Malfoy feels a bit too jock-ish for me. I think it's the proper up-an-down head. He doesn't quite feel slimy enough. Might just be the front-on angle, though.
What about exaggerating Slughorn's eyes? Making them smaller and pushing them more towards his nose? Right now he feels a bit too thoughtful and a tad too sincere.
Ha ha ha, sorry, you may not have wanted crits. I know they're just sketches. Oh well, just my 2p. It's weird seeing the others older, but hey, they look right! Bueno!