I am in no way authorized to give you advice, but...shouldn't Lily's eyes be the same shape as Harry's? I know it's hard to do that and still make her look like a pretty female. Also...her eyebrow (and perhaps her eye, as well) seem to be veeeeeeeeery close to her ear.
But, like I said, I'm really not authorized to critique your work for small errors, as you're a billion times better than me. But, I thought I'd give you my two cents anyway :)
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Date: 2005-08-27 04:36 am (UTC)But, like I said, I'm really not authorized to critique your work for small errors, as you're a billion times better than me. But, I thought I'd give you my two cents anyway :)