I really like your design for the deep downers, the second one looks pretty menacing. The scene where they tunnel into the house was one of my favourites from Thud!, it really hightened the tension and showed what i might be like if full out war broke out into the city. It proved that even Vimes, who can usually deal with anything, would not be in control. Scary stuff. My one critisism would be that the flame thrower dwarfs were described i thik with a non descript helmet which covered their face- something like this: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v739/ugluktheurukhai/dwarf.jpg
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branchandroot
Deep down dwarfs
Date: 2005-10-21 01:01 pm (UTC)My one critisism would be that the flame thrower dwarfs were described i thik with a non descript helmet which covered their face- something like this: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v739/ugluktheurukhai/dwarf.jpg