Vocabulary for Deconstruction
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tealinI've got halfway through the new Snicket series on Netflix, and several people (a phrase which here means "more than two") are curious what I think of it.
The problem is that I was supposed to be spending this week plotting out setups and payoffs, character development landmarks, and thematic threads, over the tragic arc of the Terra Nova Expedition. I have not done this, instead I've been applying those poor brain cells to retroactively "fixing" exactly those things in a television show that has already aired. This is poor time and resource management, but I couldn't shut it off.
Well, today I woke with a clear head at last, so I'm going to put a pin in the series and come back when I've made some headway on my own stuff. Once upon a time I'd have excused a bit of a deconstructive rant for the reason that it taught me stuff about story; this is no less true here, but I need to make progress on my own stuff, so I'm going to do that on the foundation that 14 years' worth of deconstructive rants has given me, and take this one instead as affirmation that my storycraft is fully functional and I ought to, you know, use it to construct something at last.
So for those several who are waiting for my review, I leave you with a decoy.
The phrase "over-egging the pudding" is an idiom in British English that means "going too far in embellishing, exaggerating, or doing something" or "spoiling something by trying to improve it excessively." It is a pity this phrase is not in more common use in America, where puddings are of the custard variety so concerns about egginess are less structural in nature, because having it in one's repertoire may have an unconscious effect on the creative person's aesthetic boundaries. If I could sum up the second series in one phrase, it would be "over-egging the pudding," but if you want to know how I would apply it to specific over-embellished improvements to the matter at hand, you're going to have to wait.
The problem is that I was supposed to be spending this week plotting out setups and payoffs, character development landmarks, and thematic threads, over the tragic arc of the Terra Nova Expedition. I have not done this, instead I've been applying those poor brain cells to retroactively "fixing" exactly those things in a television show that has already aired. This is poor time and resource management, but I couldn't shut it off.
Well, today I woke with a clear head at last, so I'm going to put a pin in the series and come back when I've made some headway on my own stuff. Once upon a time I'd have excused a bit of a deconstructive rant for the reason that it taught me stuff about story; this is no less true here, but I need to make progress on my own stuff, so I'm going to do that on the foundation that 14 years' worth of deconstructive rants has given me, and take this one instead as affirmation that my storycraft is fully functional and I ought to, you know, use it to construct something at last.
So for those several who are waiting for my review, I leave you with a decoy.
The phrase "over-egging the pudding" is an idiom in British English that means "going too far in embellishing, exaggerating, or doing something" or "spoiling something by trying to improve it excessively." It is a pity this phrase is not in more common use in America, where puddings are of the custard variety so concerns about egginess are less structural in nature, because having it in one's repertoire may have an unconscious effect on the creative person's aesthetic boundaries. If I could sum up the second series in one phrase, it would be "over-egging the pudding," but if you want to know how I would apply it to specific over-embellished improvements to the matter at hand, you're going to have to wait.
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Date: 2018-04-09 01:49 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2018-04-09 06:57 pm (UTC)I so desperately wanted to come up with an American equivalent to "over-egging the pudding" but failed, despite my certainty that there must be some Yiddish equivalent. It gets close to schmaltz, though. You also get twee, but that's fairly specific in scope (and British in origin to boot.)
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Date: 2018-04-10 02:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2018-06-06 01:56 pm (UTC)I've never been overseas but it is on my bucket list. I'm 32 going on 33 and i really liked what you said in a previous entry in regards to age and what one would say to younger you about older you in regards to experiences.
Then in this entry you spoke of British phrases, I've just binge watched "Call the Midwife" and completely wish that there was more use of British English here in the states. One particular thing that I loved was when someone says "how are you old thing?" it just seems so endearing...clearly you're not old but it's the closest thing in English,when I heard it,that it reminds me of Spanish and it's use of little terms of endearment.
sorry for the rant. anyway. keep up the amazing work and I'm so glad I found your writing.
Sincerely,
a fan (hiro)
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Date: 2018-10-18 10:31 am (UTC)