Death of a Clacksman

[tealin]

At last – I have finally finished timing out the cleaned-up board for the One Month Prologue to Going Postal.

If you have the Flash Player (you probably do), and have a high-speed connection or a lot of patience (it's 2.3MB), click to see! There aren't any sound effects yet – the one important one is indicated by the word "clink!" which appears onscreen for a couple frames, where someday there will actually be a clink. If you want to watch it again once it's faded to black, and you're on a PC, right-click on it and select "play."

Comments are appreciated. Including negative ones. Especially negative ones, if they're a useful type of negative.

(Um... one thing I've already noticed... the pullout on the tower towards the end [sc. 14] should be more in perspective.)

Comments

[salamandersoup.livejournal.com]

Oooh! That was incredible! My favorite part in the whole thing is where he leans back to look over the side. It just ... it's awesome. I'm a little confused as to why he falls, though. Does the Black Swish just scare the kapooka out of him and he looses his grip, or do the shutters close and there's nothing for him to grip onto ...? This board has made my otherwise dull and tedious day into one big happy .. thing.